Pretty good
Ha, I remember my first song I made in FL... and it was pretty terrible. It is hard to start on a new program. But it seems you did pretty good.
Anyways, this song was pretty good. I liked it. It had a nice beat and melody and bass fit is good, but it was a bit wierd how the song progressed. For example, it would just suddenly change into a totally different sound. Although wierd, it is an kind of interesting technique.
I would have to say the ending was the best part of the song, or the part I liked the best. It had a calming sound, which was a big departure from the beginning of the piece.
Overall it was pretty good piece. Keep practicing and try to find different samples and sounds to use. You are on your way to become a good artist^_^
-SineRider