Hmm
It seems like there are a couple nice melodies withing the medley of a song, but the randomness sounds almost as if you hit all the notes without thinking about how it would sound.
It was pretty bare, nothing but piano, no chords or background instruments. I think you should pick one or two melodies thrown about in there, then elaborate on them. Add harmony notes, or maybe even some chords. If you want, also add in other instruments.
Keep working at it and you'll come out with something nice.
Thanks for your vote, SineRider! You voted 2 for Pianos (Unfinished), lowering its score from 2.44 to 2.40.
-SineRider