Needs some work
This has a lot of potential, but definitely needs some work done to it.
Well you seem to have some good drum patterns in there, but the samples weren't anything special. There seemed to be some odd velocity changes in there as well.
The melody is good, kind of evil lair sound maybe? But an "ew" sounding synth. The bass was fine, but could use a bit of amping... not too much >8(
I think there should be some kind of counter melody or harmony work in there. It will add a lot more depth to the sound of the song.
Fix up the mastering, extend and you could have a good song here.
-SineRider