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I like this more then most of your other songs. Its kind of ambient dnb, I may say.
The beginning pad, was really cold. Definitely wintery sounding. There is some melody but hard to hear from the pad, because of the release
Then the drums come. I noticed them different because they didn't make my ears bleed XP. Some compression may give the bassdrum a better boom sound you know. Try and change up the hi-hat a bit too. Some double-notes or off-notes.
The bass, I think needs some serious reworking. It sounds fine on the lower notes, but when the pitch rises, it has a very bad, wobbley, like sound. I think a pure sine sound would be better without the modulation.
I look forward to the finished project, since this one was so short.
-SineRider