Holy snap
Dang, you are good at making a rap beat. I loved the beat and melody. Very nice and professional soudning. You used very good samples and sounds and everything flowed greatly.
Shit you should get someone to rap over your beats, then sell 'em. He I was playing aroudn and made my own rap beat. Yo, could you check it otu and tell me what yout think?
-SineRider
I Appreciate it man thanks and il check out some of your beats a little later.
Holy Christ
Holy shit, you can write a good metal song. I loved every bit of the song, from the heavy riffs to the melodic vocals. The recording of all the instruments and vocals were done superbly. Very nice guitarwork with the riffs and solos. I know its only a demo but it is fucking amazing, and I have no advice to give.
Thanks for your vote, SineRider! You voted 5 for As I Bleed (Demo), raising its score from 0.00 to 5.00.
-SineRider
Wow man, I upload this, go to bed and BANG, 7 reviews, wth? Didn't expect this :P Thanks alot man, im overwhelmed :)
Pretty good
Ha, I remember my first song I made in FL... and it was pretty terrible. It is hard to start on a new program. But it seems you did pretty good.
Anyways, this song was pretty good. I liked it. It had a nice beat and melody and bass fit is good, but it was a bit wierd how the song progressed. For example, it would just suddenly change into a totally different sound. Although wierd, it is an kind of interesting technique.
I would have to say the ending was the best part of the song, or the part I liked the best. It had a calming sound, which was a big departure from the beginning of the piece.
Overall it was pretty good piece. Keep practicing and try to find different samples and sounds to use. You are on your way to become a good artist^_^
-SineRider
You see, I was messing around with all the crap FL Studio has, I made this song in 1 hour, the first hour that I owned FL Stduio as a matter of fact. I was gonna add some stuff, but then I got involved in something like 5 other songs.
Very nice
Very industrial, but also has a nice dnb style beat. The beats and bass were all there and composed well. The synths were good but sounded low quality.
I also didn't really like the high pitched stabs at the end of some of the measures. It was also very distorted at times. You might want to turn down the entire track and instruments. It would remove alot of the static and distorted sound.
Overall the track was very cool, with a couple alterations, could be a great track.
8/10
-SineRider
hit me back if you get the time
well.. i wanted the song to sond really dirty and like.. grungey, so thats why the synths sound so low in quality, and why it sonds distorted at some parts.
but thx neway
cool
Wow, this really reminds me of Ministry with all the voice clips and such. But, the gutiar part had an almost happy and uplifting sound unlike Ministry. Very good guitar work and solos.
Very cool song.
-SineRider
hanks :)
I liked it
While I'm not much of a fan of punk and stuff similiar to it, but this was really good. You defenitly know how to record and put together your music because the quality is studio-like.
The riffs was pretty heavy and was very apperent. The vocals were recorded very well and were good, except they sounded a bit underpowered up against the drums and guitars.
A very nice track. You get my 5
-SineRider
hit me bak if you get the time^_^
Well i would like to thank you for your review and your 5. I'm glad you spotted some of my mistakes. I will try my best to improve using some of those suggestions. It actually cost $10 to make this song! Well thanks again for the review!
Sweet
Wow, such calm ambiance. Defently has a outer space vibe to it. I love the nice simple melody and pads a superb. Not much else to say.
5/5
10/10
-Sinerider
nice quik review lol
Well i think you said just about enough there, sometimes the short uns are the best un's, glad you enjoyed it and thanks for the 5.
pitters
Nice thumpin' bass
Pretty cool track. I really liked it. It had a nice thumpin bassy sound. The melody was odd yet perfect. Although the first beat we hard to hear at times, the second beat to come in was alot more clear.
It did sound like it was missing somthing. Possibly another instrument. Also it was a bit repetetive.
Good track
-SineRider
hit me back dawg lol
finally, a score I actually deserve! hahaha. Thanks for the the review!
cool track
Very interesting track. It has a nice strange vibe to it. I love the drum beat and the effects. It flows nice and instruments fit perfectly. Nice piano work, and synths. The robot voice was cool and all, but kinda annoying lol.
Cool song^_^
5/5
9/10
-SineRider
is there any other kind of robot Speech synth. Hey thats my robot girlfriend u just offended. jk jk Thx for the review man.
Fucking Awesome
Wow, I am very impressed with this track. Everything has its parts and fit in great.
I love that solo part in the middle song, it goes in perfectly and almsot reminded me of something from pink floyd.
I love the drum samples and the beat. The bass is nice and fits in properly. The melody is great.
The title paints a nice picture of the song. I could imagine some kind of futuristic city.
I loved every part of this piece and I'm defently downlaoding this.
5/5
10/10
-SineRider
hit me back if you get the time^_^
Thanks for your response! I'm glad you enjoyed the song.
As for the drums, it isn't a sampled loop, but a drum track I programmed myself, then processed heavily to get the sound you hear in this version. ;)
Thanks again, and I'll try to get some more stuff uploaded here in the near future, and hopefully find myself in a few submissions on the site.
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